Wednesday, May 13, 2009

Chapter 5 ''The Jades Army''

-Morning time-

"Everyone get up" yelled Ace. "'s to early" complained Eduard as he got up his bed.
"Everyone get dressed and come to the sqaure" yelled Ace. "..Whats going on now." said Clive as he got dressed up.

-Everyone meets up at square-

"Everyone today is going to be a big day, we will march to Jades cave and attack them. Don't worry we won't take the camps because we'll be staying here after." yelled Ace. "Okay, everyone get the weapons, armors, shields ready" yelled Clive as he went by Eduard.

-Meanwhile Kunam, Gaara and Disco has secretly gone to see how tight the security was at Jades hideout-

"How much farther" asked Kunam as he slowly creeped through the forest. "We're close" replied Disco. "Hey Disco, i heard about you before" said Gaara. "Oh really? where" asked Disco. "Your a survivor of the Forbidden Gates army, that was said to be dead 10 years ago, right?" asked Gaara. "Okay, I don't know hwo you know that, but I will explain it when we return" replied Disco. "Well, you must be a good fighter, if you were in it" said Gaara with a smile. "You haven't see anything yet" replied Disco. "Okay guys shut up, i can hear the guards now" said Kunam.

-They slowly hide by trees and peaked at what was going on-

"Damn, I need to go to the bathroom hella bad" said Jades guard to the other. "You always have to..hurry the hell up" replied Jade's guard #2. "I will, don't worry we already wiped the village one got away haha" replied Jade's guard.

"Hey look theres only 1 guard we should get in" said Gaara. "Okay, we will go in and in 1 hour from now the knights will come to attack too" replied Kunam. "Yeah, so by that they would be distracted and archmor knights will have advangtage" replied Disco. "Exactly" replied Kunam. "Gaara do your job" said Kunam with a smile.

-Gaara slowly went from behind the guard and coked him to death-

"Good job, lets go" replied Kunam. "Wait! Gaara hide his body here in the bush" said Disco. "Yeah, we can't allow to get attention yet" replied Gaara as he hides the body.

-They go inside-

"Creepy" said Kunam. "Wow this place is nicely built though" replied Disco. "Don't get off guard guys, we're on enemy's land" said Gaara.

-After a couple of fights with guards, they take the guards clothes and dress up like them. Soon they get close to the Jade's chamber-

"This must be his chamber" replied Kunam. "Yeah, try to act normal, theirs alot of guards" replied Disco. "Lets go" replied Gaara.

-They went by the chambers heavily closed doors, guarded by big guards-

"Nice day" said Kunam to the guards as he saluted them" "Wait! you can't just pass to the Jade's chamber like that, you know better than that" said the Giant guard as he blocked the way. "Whats your reason for trying to go" asked The other Giant Guard. "Very important sir, we have found information of things" replied Kunam as he tried to make a deep voice sound. "Hmm..okay go" replied the Giant guard.

-Door opens and they step in-

"The knights are suppose to be attacking by now" said Gaara. "Damn, okay hide by these barrels while we wait for the attack so the Jade is left unguarded" replied Kunam.

-Meanwhile Archmor's knights had already attack-

"CHARGE!!!!!" Commanded Ace. "Wooohooo" replied Eduard as he shot random people, even some of archmor knights. "Eduard aim damn it" replied Clive as he cut a gaurds head off.

-Soon the place was cleared-

"Haha Victory!" yelled Clive. "Not yet, we must go inside now" replied Ace.

- Meanwhile back at the barrels-

"Hurry we are underattack" yelled a gaurd as him and 10 other gaurds run past by. "Looks like they are here now" said Kunam. "Okay, now the Jade's turn to die" replied Disco. "Okay, lets move in" replied Kunam.

-They go into the chamber and Jade sees them-

"Who goes there?" asked Jade. "You death" replied Gaara as he charged at the Jade.

-They battle feriously, disco jumps in too-

"Ha! two on one no problem" Replied the jade as his sword started to glow. "What the hell?" asked Gaara. "Shit! move away from him fast" -But it was to late- "100 Blade attack" Yelled Jade. -Gaara and Disco go flying and hit the wall-

"Damn, I can't move" said Gaara. "Now your turn" replied Jade look at Kunam. "Try me" replied Kunam.

-They fought and kept swing, but they could not kill each other-

"Argg" yelled Kunam as he got cut in his hand. "Hahaha" replied Jade. -Suddenly the knights are here-

"Stop right there Jade" yelled Eduard as he shot a arrow. "Huh" said Jade as he got hit by the arrow. "Damn you cheap shooter" replied Jade.

-They tight up jade and leave him there-

"Guys, get Gaara and Disco, we better get out of here before this place explodes. "C'mon lets go" said kunam as he held his hand. "You pay for this Kunam!!" Yelled Jade.

- They get out and the place explodes-

"Hahah, Jade is finally dead" Yelled Disco. "You have avenged you people" replied Kunam. "Kunam, i can't thank you gusy enough, but to repay you guys, i will join to help you now" replied Disco. "Welcome to the team" replied Kunam. "Okay okay, Gaara hasn't got up yet" replied Ace.
"Lets head back and treat him" replied Kunam. "Okay lets go back knights" Yelled Eduard. "Hey hey thats my job" replied Ace. "Not no more haha" replied Eduard.

-They went on there way back to the burn't village-

-Meanwhile at the destoryed cave-

"Jade, wake up" yelled a unknown voice. -Suddenly Jade gets up- "Where the hell am i?" asked Jade. "I saved you before it exploded" replied the demon looking man. "Who are you?" asked Jade. "The name is Sairo, i want to make a deal with you" replied Sairo. "Deal?" asked Jade. "You join us and we will help you take revange on them" replied Sairo. "Whose us?" asked Jade. "You'll find out once we go to our castle." replied Jade. "Hmm lets go then" replied Jade.

-Next chapter- The demons.

Monday, May 11, 2009

Chapter 4 "Finally light"

-Eduard takes them through the cave-

"Almost there" said Eduard. "The soldiers must be getting tired of carrying all the stuff" replied Kunam. "Don't worry the village is close" replied Eduard. "Wow, I see light haha" yelled Ace. "Finally..." replied Gaara.

-They go through the cave-

"Okay, the village is south from here" said Eduard. "Okay, keep leading" replied Kunam.

"You really trust this guy?" Gaara whispers to Kunam. "He doesn't seem bad" replied Kunam.
"Okay, guys just a little more, we are at Giant shrubs now" said Eduard. "Something smells like burning" said Clive. "Hmm.. I smell that too" replied Kunam. "SHIT! it's from the village, cmon" yelled Eduard.

-They ran as fast as they could, but were to late, the village was burnt down-

"Damn, NOOOOOOOOO" cried Eduard. "....Damn, that demon" said Gaara. "Look for survivors" commanded Kunam.


"All burned to ashes" replied Eduard. -Suddenly a sounds comes out- "Cough cough" coughed the unknown voice. "Someone is here, search for him" said Kunam.

"Look there" pointed Ace by a tree. -They ran to him" "Ace, heal him" said Kunam. "Yes sir" replied Ace. "Kunam we should camp here for tonight" said Gaara. "Yeah, tell the knights to get the camps ready" replied Kunam. "Clive, gaurd the mans camp" commanded Kunam. "Okay" replied Clive.

- It turns night-

"Is he better Ace?" asked Kunam. "Yes, lets go to his camp" replied Ace. -They go-

"Clive stay outside" said Kunam. "Thanks for saving my life" replied the man. "What is your name?" asked Kunam. "Everyone called me Disco" replied Disco. "Disco we need help from you, please tell us what happened" asked Kunam. -Eduard disrupts-

"Woah woah wait don't tell them with out me here" said Eduard as he rushed though the door.
"Okay go on" said Kunam. "Okay, it was a peaceful day and like everyday everyone was playing outside. Then all of sudden, warriors on horses come and start killing and burning" said Disco.
"Who were they?" asked Ace. "The South tribe, with there leader Jade" replied Disco. "Jade..I'll cut his throut off" replied Eduard. "I wanna join you guys and help fight" asked Disco.

"We're on a different mission though" said Kunam. -Ace explains story-
"Well, you can't get into Cascades lands without passing Jades first either" replied Disco. "Then we'll kill them" replied Gaara suddenly coming in. "Whats the next place after this?" asked Kunam. "The underground cave, its where digers work, but it's really Jades hideout" replied Disco.

"Then we shall stay here for 2 days and then depart there, in the mean time pepare and don't get off guard" commanded Kunam. "Kunam, get some rest" said Ace. "You guys do, i'll be outside for awhile" replied Kunam.

-Kunam heads outside and looks up in the sky. He sees The Forbidden Gates opening. His interupted by Eduard-

"You okay?" asked Eduard. "Yeah, just weird thoughts" replied Kunam. "Oh, so your the king of the northern lands?" asked Eduard. "Yes." replied Kunam. "Kunam, can i ask you something?" asked Eduard. "Hmm, yeah" replied Kunam.

"You know when i was gonna kill that glaag, i heard you say, Gaara, let me kill this one. Did you know i was gonna miss the arrow and hit someone?" asked Eduard. "" replied Kunam.
"Well, because Gaara was hurt from earlier, so you knew if it hit him in accident, he might have died" replied Eduard. "Well, lets just say I can sense when things are gonna happen" replied Kunam.

-Meanwhile Gaara was listening-

"So thats why he didn't let me attack it..." Gaara whispered to himself.

-Next chapter 5- ''The Jade's army''

Lol@some typos

Chapter 3- ''The Cave and New member''


“Everyone get up, we’re moving on” yelled Ace. “What…it’s still night” whined Clive. “Get up you lazy frog” said Ace. “Okay okay, calm down” replied Clive. “Sir Ace, Gaara is at his camp waiting for you” suddenly said a Knight. “Okay thanks, you go on and tell everyone to get ready we got one hour to pack up” commanded Ace. “Yes sir” replied Knight.

-Ace goes into Gaaras camp-

“Feeling better?” asked Ace. “Your medicines always work haha” replied Gaara. “Your still injured though, try not to be to active” said Ace. “What happened to the demon?” asked Gaara.

-Kunam comes in suddenly-

“He left, we are no match for him right now” replied Kunam as he came in. “Next time I see him, he’ll be dead meat” replied Gaara. “He said his name is Sairo, I’m sure we will meet him again, but right now we have one mission” replied Kunam. “Your highness, the army is ready to depart” said Clive leaning on the door. “Good, we’re coming” replied Kunam.

-Goes outside to the knights-

“Okay man, this cave is no joke, many monsters are in there, watch each others backs and we’ll be safe” Said Kunam to the 100 knights. “Yes Sir” yelled The Knights.

-The dark cave of Glaag-

“Now this place is freaky” said Clive. “Shh, stay quiet I don’t want to get attention” replied Kunam.

-Half way through-

*noise* Rawr rawr

“*frightened* The heck was that?” asked Clive. “Giant floating octopus looking monsters” replied Gaara. “How you know” asked Ace. “I’ll tell later, he comes one *Takes sword out* replied Gaara. “No Gaara let me kill this” said Kunam. “But..” replied Gaara. “It’s okay I can take it” replied Kunam.

-Kunam charges at the Glaag, but suddenly a arrow shoots out from behind the glaag and hits Kunam-

“Arrrg” cried Kunam. “Oh no, Kunam!” yelled Clive, Gaara and Ace while running up to him. “Damn, kill the damn glaag Ace” commanded Kunam.

“Ace is stepping up to kill it but an arrow already kills it-

“Huh” whose there” asked Ace. -A voice speaks up-

“Haha, that got the Glaag good” said The unknown voice. -Suddenly he appears-
“Grr, you attacked our leader Kunam you should die for that” said Gaara. “No Gaara it wasn’t in purpose” replied Kunam. “Sorry, he came in the way” replied The man. “…..” replied Gaara.

“Is he okay?” asked The man. “He’ll live, he has been through more than that haha” replied Clive. “What’s your name and what are you doing here mister?” Asked Ace. “The names Eduard, and I always come here for hunting” replied Eduard. “Oh, we thought you are a spy of Sairo or something. “Sairo the demon?” asked Eduard. “Yes, you know him?” Asked Ace. “Who doesn’t, he burned down a village yesterday” replied Eduard. “Damn him..” said Gaara. “Haha, nice hit Eduard” replied Kunam as he got up. “Sorry man didn’t mean haha” replied Eduard. “So whats up?” asked Eduard.

-They explain the story-

“Wow, seems bad” said Eduard. “Yeah it is” replied Kunam. “You know the way out of here Eduard?” asked Gaara. “Yeah, what are we waiting for” replied Eduard. “Okay lead us” replied Kunam. “You guys can tell me more at my village coming up, it’s just passed the cave and past the Giant shrubs area” replied Eduard.

-Chapter 4 -Finally Light!


Saturday, May 9, 2009

Chapter 2

-The night came-

“Wow it sure does get dark here” said Gaara. “Scared of the dark?” asked Ace. “Me? I was born in the dark hahaha” replied Gaara. “Ace how’s the guard?” suddenly asked Kunam.
“Oh, his feeling better, he says he can help us out” said Clive. “How?” asked Kunam. “He’ll say in the morning” replied Clive. “Hmm.. We’ll see” said Kunam.

-As he was going to his camp, they all heard a loud scream-
“The hell was that?” asked Gaara. “Shit, came from the back camps” said Ace. “C’mon get you swords and lets go” commanded Kunam.

-They went and saw one of there knights lying on the ground-

“Is he alive, check Ace” said Kunam. “Your highness, I’m sorry I couldn’t kill him, but save the Cave guard” replied The dieing knight. “Damn, his dead” said Ace. “Gaara hurry to the Cave guards camp, go fast!” commanded Kunam. “Yes sir” replied Gaara as he ran to the camp. “Where the hell is Clive?” asked Kunam. “He might be in his camp” replied Ace. “Go get him and get more men” said Kunam.

-Ace runs to Clive’s camp, and Kunam goes to the cave guards camp, where a big battle is happing between Gaara and Dark armored knight-
“Grrr, die you damn beast” said Gaara as he slashed his sword. *The dark armored knight grinned*

“Kunam!” yelled Clive. “Check it out” replied Kunam. “What hell is that” asked Clive. “Whatever it is, it’s possed with darkness around it” said Ace. “At least Gaara has the Demon ring so it gives him power too” replied Kunam.

-Gaara and the demon kept battling, but then the demon gets more powerful

"Ahhh, I can't even damage him now" yelled Gaara. "Rage of Destruction!" yelled The dark armored Knight.

-Gaara goes flying and hits a barrel. He faints.-

"Gaara!" cried Clive. "Hahaha, you guys are next" grinned The dark armored knight. "Ace, take Gaara away" Commanded Kunam. "Who are you demon" asked Clive. "*The demon looked at him strangely and rushed to attack*" Kunam blocks the hit"

"The name is Sairo" replied The dark armored knight. "Sairo what do you want with us, and who do you work for?" asked Kunam. "Hahaha, you all will soon find out, we shall meet again" replied Sairo as he disappeared.

"Damn, Clive get the guards to guard around the camps" Said Kunam. "Yes, sir" replied Clive.

-Ace comes in-

"Gaara is recovering sir" said Ace. "Good, we're going to cross the cave at sunlight, i have a feeling Cascade is behind all this" Replied Kunam.


Friday, May 8, 2009

Chapter 1

.The Forbidden Gates of East.

In the Peaceful town of Archmor one stormy night a light passed through the sky. It was heading down toward the village.

‘’ What the hell is that light‘’, said, a villager while other people from the town started to come out. ‘’It’s heading toward the village RUN!!’’ Said, another the old villagerJust after the thing was getting closer, the great warrior of the village had arrived from his long journey. “The king is back’’ yelled a villager.

“What the hell is that thing up there’’ said The king. “It’s coming down to us, we don’t know what it is maybe a Supernova, said Clive. “Move out of the middle everyone fast!’’, said The king. -As they moved out the thing got closer and closer and crashed right in the village- ‘’ Ahh I cant see‘’, said a old villager. - The light suddenly comes back-

“Huh, nothing happened, said The king. “King Kunam, it came from the eastern gates, said Clive. “ No way, the eastern gates is the Forbidden Gates, get an army together right now we’re going to march there, said Kunam. - Later in the kings room- “ You know the gates is the most ancient place in our world, said Clive. “Yeah, I’m hoping nothing has happened to it, we shall depart tomorrow, said Kunam as he went by his helmet.

-Early in the morning- “Get ready here comes the king, said Clive. “Damn I just got back from a mission and now another one?” said the man with the coat.
“Hahaha Gaara that’s how it always works here” said Clive.

“This one better be a fast one” said Gaara. “I doubt that” said Clive.
-King Kunam comes out- ‘’All hail Kunam’’ said the crowd of people as the knights left the village.

-On there way to the gates they had to pass through the cave known as the Glaag cave-

“Glaag cave’’

-One guard was blocking the way-

“This place is off limits, leave now” said, The ave Guard. “Clive we got company, ugh’’ said, Archmor’s warrior. “Gah, what now, oh a guard, we are here by permission by our king Kunam please stand out of the way’’ said Clive. “It is my job is not let anyone pass this cave line to the lands of king Cascade, sorry I can’t let you guys pass” said, The cave guard.

-Gaara comes in to see why the army has stopped-

“What the hell is taking so long Clive” said, Gaara as he ran to see. “This guard of king Cascade of the east says his in order to not let anyone pass” said, Clive as he looked at the guard. “Grr, Hey you guard this is the last time I’m going to ask you to move or I’m gonna have to cut you hands off” said, Gaara.

“I said I can’t let anyone pass, just leave if you don’t want trouble” said, The cave guard. “Okay that’s it I gave you your chance, now you can go to hell” Says Gaara as he takes out his sword charging at the Guard. “Ugh” squeaked The cave guard

-“Gaara charges and attacks the guard, the guards sword falls and Gaara is about to kill him, but someone yells Stop!”-

“Stop right there Gaara” said, A deep sounding voice. “Huh, your highness Kunam” said, Gaara as he put his sword down.

“This is not necessary Gaara, his just following orders” said, Kunam. “I gave him his chance your highness” said, Gaara. “Step down Gaara” Says Kunam has he starts walking by the fallen guard”. “Uhh, *Guard starts to get up* “No stay down, you might hurt your self more, Clive where’s Ace?” said, Kunam

“Ace, he should be somewhere in the back, I’ll go get him sir” said, Clive. -Clive leaves-
“Cave guard, this is very important, we have to pass through” said Kunam as he bend over to make eye contact. “What is so important” Asked The cave guard. “There was a light coming from the Gates, we have to go check it out” Said Kunam. -As kunam was explaining he was interrupted by Ace-

“Your highness what can I do” asked Ace. “Heal this Guard make sure his back to normal, we shall camp here till tomorrow, everyone must be tired” Commanded Kunam.
“Okay everyone, we will camp here tonight get the camps running” Yelled Gaara.

-The night came-

Welcome to the ''My tfg story blog''

I'm currently writing my story for TFG. I hope people read it.

It's about Kunam and his men going in the most difficult journey to save the opening of the Gates.

Story title- The Forbidden Gates Of the East.